A Photograph
By Shirley Toulson
About the Author
Shirley Toulson was born on 20th May 1924 in
Henley-on-Thames, England. She had a great passion for writing and was greatly
influenced by her father who was a writer too. She secured a B.A. on Literature
from Brockenhurst College in London in the year 1953. Shortly, she took writing
as a career but also served as the editor for many magazines in meantime. She
married Alan Brownjohn on 6th February 1960. They had three children - Janet
Sayers, Ian Toulson and Steven brownjohn. But after nine years they divorced on
March 1969.
Poem:
A Photograph
The cardboard shows
me how it was
When
the two girl cousins went paddling
Each one holding one of my mother’s hands,
And she the big girl - some twelve years or so.
All three stood still to smile through their hair
At the uncle with the camera, A sweet face
My mother’s, that was before I was born
And the sea, which appears to have changed less
Washed their terribly transient feet.
Some twenty- thirty- years later
She’d laugh at the snapshot. “See Betty
And Dolly,” she’d say, “and look how they
Dressed us for the beach.” The sea holiday
was her past, mine is her laughter. Both wry
With the laboured ease of loss
Now she’s has been dead nearly as many years
As that girl lived. And of this circumstance
There is nothing to say at all,
Its silence silences.
Introduction
The poet describes how
deeply she feels the loss of her mother. Her mother has been dead for more than
twelve years. The poet recalls how her mother used to look at a photograph and
remember her own childhood.
Summary
The poet looks at the photograph of her mother
which was taken when her mother was 12 years old. She had gone for a sea
holiday with her cousins Betty and Dolly. While they were paddling on the beach,
her uncle clicked a photograph. Each of the cousins was holding the hands of
the poet’s mother who was the oldest among them. All the three of them stood
smiling through their hair while the photo was taken. Her mother had a sweet
face, but it was a time before she was
born. Years fled past since then. Her mother grew up into an adult. They all
underwent changes while the sea stood still.
After about twenty or thirty years the poet’s
mother would look at the photograph laughing nostalgically and remembering the
past. She would appreciate the dress worn by her cousins Betty and Dolly. The
sea holiday belonged to the past of her mother and the poet still remembers how
her mother would laugh looking at the snapshot. For the poet both these bring
great sadness and an acute sense of loss.
Her mother died 12 years ago and now the poet
has nothing to say about this circumstance of the photograph. The silence of the whole situation silences the poet
and leaves her quiet.
Main
Points
1. The poet looks at a childhood photograph of
her mother.
2. She had gone for a sea holiday with her two cousins
Betty and Dolly
3. While they were paddling on the beach, their
uncle photographed their sweet smile in a camera.
4. Both the cousins were holding the hands of
her mother who was the oldest among the girls.
5. This was before the poet was born.
6. Time fled past since then and all those who
are in the photograph underwent changes while the sea remained the same.
7. Her mother would look at the photograph
after about twenty or thirty years and laugh at this photo nostalgically.
8. Now for the poet her mother’s laughter and
her sea holiday is a thing of the past.
9. Her mother died about 12 years ago.
10. The silence of the photograph silences the
poet.
11. She experiences great loss.
Detailed Explanation
1. Explain: ‘The cardboard shows me how it was’.
Ans. The photograph shows the narrator who
it was that day.
Poetic device: allusion as the cardboard’s
lack of durability hints at the lack of permanence of human life
2. Explain:
‘All three stood
still to smile through their hair’.
Ans. All three of them stood smiling, their
hair were flying over their faces (possibly tossed by the beach wind or water)
Poetic device:
alliteration... stood still to smile
3. Explain:
‘And the sea, which appears to have changed less
Washed their terribly transient feet.’
Ans. The sea in the picture is still the
same today and has changed very less. It seems to wash their feet which by
nature, are transient because human life is short-lived as compared to nature.
Nature is perennial while
human life is temporary or transient. The poet uses a transferred epithet
(terribly transient feet) in order to make this comparison and highlight the
terribly short-lived life of her mother.
Poetic device: Transferred Epithet. Human
life itself is temporary not the feet. When the adjective for one noun like
life is transferred to another noun like feet, it is called transferred
epithet. It is also alliteration due to the repetition of the ‘t’ sound (their terribly transient feet) but writing only
alliteration as the poetic device will lead to a loss of marks)
4. Explain:
‘The sea holiday
was her past, mine is her laughter. Both wry
With the laboured ease of loss’
Ans. The sea holiday was remembered by her
mother with a fondness as well as a sense of loss because that time would never
return. Similarly, her laughter would never return to the
narrator. The sea holiday was the narrator’s mother’s past and her mother’s
laughter is the narrator’s past. Both
these pasts are remembered with a difficult and yet easy sense of loss.
Poetic device: oxymoron.
The coming together of two
opposite ideas to describe the same entity. ‘Laboured’ and ‘ease’ are opposite
words describing the same entity ‘losses’. The loss of the holiday and the
laughter was easy because these things have to be accepted as a part of life.
They are merely a part of the past and cannot be brought back or relived.
However, precisely
because they cannot be
relived, there will always be a tinge of difficulty letting them go completely.
They will always be seen as loss.
The camera thus
managed to capture a moment in time. It kept the memory of the mother and for
the mother alive. The sea holiday brought a sad smile (wry) to the mother’s
face because she couldn’t relive it but was glad that she once had. Similarly,
thinking of her mother’s laughter brought a sad smile to the poet’s face because
although that laughter was now gone she was glad to have once had it in her
life.
5. Explain: ‘that girl lived’.
Ans. Now, it has been twelve
years since her mother passed away. The girl in the photograph seems like a different
person altogether. That’s why the poet has used the words, ‘that girl’.
6. Explain:
‘And of this circumstance
There is nothing to say at all,
Its silence silences.’
Ans. Her
mother has passed away leaving behind nothing but memories and photographs like
this one. There is nothing to be said. It is a part of life
and on thinking of it, one really has no words to express how one feels.
The silence of the whole situation silences
the poet and leaves her quiet.
Poetic device: alliteration
and personification. The situation has been given the human quality of silence
and the sound of ‘s’ has been repeated)
1. Read the following
extract and answer the questions that follow:
The
cardboard shows me how it was
When
the two girl cousins went paddling
Each
one holding one of my mother’s hands,
And
she the big girl- some twelve years or so.
Q.
What does the cardboard refer to?
Ans. The
cardboard refers to the childhood photograph of her mother.
Q.
Who was the big girl and how old was she?
Ans. The
big girl was the poet’s mother. She was then twelve years old.
Q.
How did the cousins go paddling with mother?
Ans. The
girl cousins went paddling with mother holding her hand.
2. Read the following
extract and answer the questions that follow:
All
three stood still to smile through their hair
At
the uncle with the camera, A sweet face
My
mother’s, that was before I was born
Q.
Who does ‘all three’ refer to here?
Ans.
‘all three’ refers to the poet’s mother and her two cousins.
Q.
Where are they now?
Ans.
They have gone to the seashore. They are paddling in the water.
Q.
Why did they smile through their hair?
Ans.
They smiled through their hair because they were posing for a photograph.
3. Read the following
extract and answer the questions that follow:
……………………….A sweet face,
My
mother’s, that was before I was born
And
the sea, which appears to have changed less
Washed
their terribly transient feet.
Q.
Where was her mother?
Ans. Her
mother was on the sea shore with her cousins and posing for a photograph.
Q.
When did this incident take place?
Ans.
This incident took place when she was twelve years old.
Q.
How is the poet able to remember her mother’s childhood?
Ans. The
poet is able to remember her mother’s childhood when she looks into the
photograph of her mother.
Q.
What has stood the onslaught of time and what has not?
Ans. The
sea has stood the onslaught of time. It is still the same. However, her mother
and her cousins underwent changes. Her mother grew up to be an adult and now
she is no more.
4. Read the following
extract and answer the questions that follow:
Some
twenty- thirty- years later
she’d
laugh at the snapshot. “See Betty
And
Dolly,” she’d say, “and look how they
dressed
us for the beach.”
Q.
Who would laugh at the snapshot after twenty – thirty years later?
Ans. The
poet’s mother would laugh at the snapshot after twenty – thirty years later.
Q.
How did mother remember her past?
Ans.
Mother remembered her past with nostalgia.
Q.
Who were Betty and Dolly?
Ans.
Betty and Dolly were her cousins who had gone with her to the beach for
paddling.
5. Read the following
extract and answer the questions that follow:
………………………The
sea holiday
was
her past, mine is her laughter. Both wry
With
the laboured ease of loss
Q. Who went for the sea holiday in the past?
Ans. The poet’s mother had gone for the sea
holiday in the past when she was a young girl.
Q. What does ‘both’ refer to?
Ans. Both’ refers to the poet’s mother
remembering her past sea holiday as well as the poet remembering her mother’s
laughter.
Q. How does the poet feel when she remembers her mother?
Ans. The poet experiences great sorrow when
she remembers her mother who left for heavenly abode twelve years ago.
Q. What does the poet compare her laughter to and why?
Ans. The mother’s laughter that used to echo
in the house when she was alive has now become the poet’s past. The comparison
is given in order to remember the mother with fondness while looking at her
photograph.
6. Read the following
extract and answer the questions that follow:
Now
she’s has been dead nearly as many years
As that girl lived. And of this circumstance
There is nothing to say at all,
Its silence silences.
Q. When did the poet’s
mother die?
Ans. The poet’s mother died
about twelve years ago.
Q. What does the poet
remember of that girl?
Ans. She remembers how much
her mother had changed from a young girl. She also remembers the sweet laughter
of her mother.
Q. Explain: ‘Its silence silences.’
Ans. The loss of her
mother is too deep for the poet. Now she has nothing to say at all. The
silence of the whole situation silences the poet and leaves her quiet.
Q.
What is ‘this circumstance’?
Ans.
This circumstance means the death of her mother.
Short
Answer Type Questions
Q1. What does the word ‘cardboard’ denote in the poem? Why
has this word been used?
Ans. ‘Cardboard’ refers to the photograph
only. In the past photographs used to be fixed on a cardboard and hung from the
wall for everyone to see it.
Q2. What has not changed over the years? Does this suggest
something to you?
Ans. The sea has not changed over the years.
It suggests the immortality of sea as compared to the mortal human beings whose
life comes to an end finally.
Q3.
The poet’s mother laughed at the snapshot. What does this laugh indicate?
Ans. The poet’s mother laughed at the
snapshot. This is an indication of the fun and joy she had experienced during
the beach holiday and she had fond memories of that particular incident. It brought
joy to her when she looked at the snapshot.
Q4. What does ‘this circumstance’ refer to?
Ans. ‘This circumstance’ refers to the
loneliness and the sense of loss that the poet suffers as she remembers her
mother who is no more.
Q5. What do you learn about the poet’s mother from the
photograph?
Ans. The poet’s mother had been a fun loving
girl who had taken great delight with her cousins at the beach and had the fond
memories of the holiday that she cherished even when she was a grown up.
Q6. What has the camera captured?
Ans. The camera has captured some happy
moments from the childhood of the poet’s mother. It was a scene taken from a
beach where she had gone with her cousins and her uncle for a sea holiday. The
girls were paddling in the water.
Q. The poet’s mother laughed at the snapshot. What did this
laugh indicate?
Ans. This laugh indicates her remembering
her past. She looked back to her childhood with nostalgia and remembered the
innocent joys of her childhood days.
Q. What is the meaning of the line “Both wry with the
laboured ease or loss”
Ans. ‘Both’ refers to the sea holiday as
remembered by her mother and the poet remembering her mother’s laughing face.
Both these now belong to the past. Her mother is no more now.
Q. What scene from mother’s childhood has been captured in
the photograph? Who had taken the photograph?
Ans. The scene that has been captured in the
photograph is from mother’s childhood when she went for paddling with her two
cousins. Mother’s uncle had taken the photograph.
Q. How did the cousins accompany mother for paddling?
Ans. Her cousins accompanied mother by
holding her hands when they went for paddling.
Q. Explain the contrast given in the last two lines of the
first stanza.
Ans. The contrast is between the sea and the
humans. The sea had remained the same for all these years, but the humans have
undergone changes. Her mother grew up and now she had been dead for the past
twelve years.
Q. How does the poet feel when she remembers the sea
holiday of her mother?
Ans. The poet feels sad when she remembers
the sea holiday of her mother. Her mother died twelve years ago.
Q. Why doesn’t she want to think about the photograph
anymore?
Ans. She doesn’t want think about the
photograph anymore because it brings the pain of loss to her mind.
Q. The three stanzas depict three different phases. What
are they?
Ans. The three stanzas depict three
different phases of life. The first stanza refers to the childhood of the
poet’s mother. The second stanza refers to the adulthood of the poet’s mother.
The last stanza refers to the last phase of life - the death of the poet’s mother.